In many countries it is common for families to own and run their own business. Some people think this is the best way to run a business, while others consider this a potential source of problem. What is your opinion?
It is true that family business is becoming increasingly common among people around the world. In this regards, there are different views; while some argue that it would be the best way to achieve the business goals, I strongly believe that workplace should be entirely separated from the home atmosphere.
There are various reasons why some people believe that the most successful businesses were based in the families. They assert that if investment on a new work is made between family members, it is more likely to meet the targets. In fact, being in emotional relationship with each other, tending to progress weather about themselves or their family members, they allocate all their time and energy to achieve financial objectives. In addition, proponents of this idea argue that rivalry between family members are lower and they are less likely to deceive each other. As a result, economic growth in a society is going to be more rapid.
In spite of these arguments, I believe that this trend may make serious problems. Firstly, it has been psychologically proved that worker's efficiency will be promoted provided that they spend normal time at work and then allocate a specific time for their families. Establishing a family business usually leads to lack of having a relaxed atmosphere at home. Because, in fact, workplace and home are the same. Moreover, individuals should have this right to select their way of life, according to their personalities. Not being interested in an occupation or not being qualified adequately for a pre-specified position, they may escape from shouldering their responsibilities. Consequently, the business laps into failing. Finally, in today's unforeseeable economic climate, it would be not safe if all of family members were in a similar field to make money.
In conclusion, although establishing a new business may bring some benefits to both individuals and society, I personally prefer to work in a different environment based on my interests and economic conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25617283951 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95767757759 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7828319035 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14999241899 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476574321554 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388960465092 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910778439284 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449115633462 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.