In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced
locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?
It is suggested that nowadays, foreign food would be a preferable option for citizens in almost nation
rather than domestic ones. From my point of view, there are two justifiable explanations as follow for
this tendency and the government should take some actions to reduce the quantity of overseas product
consumption.
To commence with, the quality of overseas food and the augmentation in citizens’ demands are
motivating the less favor for local products. Obviously, in emerging nations where the food resources
are not censored strictly, there is no assurance about the cleanness and safety and actually the
inhabitants would opt for overseas material being manufactured structurally and checked prior to
importing. To exemplify this case, in Vietnam, the citizens spray grow-up chemicals on the vegetables
to reap in the shortest time, resulting in the high content of noxious ingredient in the products and the
customers are attempting to seek for China or Thailand alternatives with more confidence in quality.
Furthermore, that some sorts of food are solely availability in distinct regions compelling the increase
in imported ones to satisfy the citizens’ needs for abundant dishes for each meal.
To address this issue, imposing some strict regulations would be an efficient measure. Firstly, the
authority should strengthen the number of police to supervise the manufacturing process of food to
prevent actions poisoning the products as well as penalize some offenders to raise the overall
awareness of sellers. As a result, the quality of food would be ensured and the citizens would gain
more confidence in purchasing domestic resources. Secondly, levying high taxes on imported
products would require the citizens to pay more to obtain foreign food, which means they may have to
select local food as an affordable choice.
With the mentioned statements, I reaffirm that the conception of inhabitants about quality of overseas
products and the increase in demand would contribute to the high consumption of imported food. To
the governments, applying laws would be an effective method to encourage the use of domestic
products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57014925373 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96714616049 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558208955224 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2131975603 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.5 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204185039538 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845836753489 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572473705713 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626426156462 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542920835296 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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