In many countries, the number of animals and plant is declining. Why do you think it is happening? How to solve this issue?
In many nations, animal populations and plant coverage are dropped significantly. I believe that the urbanization and industrialization are the major causes of this situation. Fortunately, although these issues had led to a decline in animals and plant numbers, there are ways we can solve this problem.
Firstly, the biggest cause of this trend is the increasing rate of urbanization. In the past, most of people have lived in the country side. This meant that there was always a place for plant to grow. It also meant that it created suitable living environment for many species, including wild animals and domestical animals. These days, people prefer to live in the cities instead, this raises the need of transforming country side to cities and puts more stress on the living environment of animals and plant.
Secondly, the need of industrialization is another cause of the decline. These days, under the pressure of the economic development, people need more land to build factories and need resources such as coal, wood for industrialized production. This means they have to exploit the living environment of wild animals and plant. It also means that when they invade the environment, animals and plant have to find another place for their living. All of this adds up to a significant drop in the number of animals and plant.
Fortunately, there are things can be done to solve some of these problems if people really want to. People can decide to live in the country side and work remotely. This would help to decrease the need of urbanization. In addition, people can also find a way to reduce their desires of consuming industrialized products or only buy local goods. These things required changing their lifestyle in some big ways, but they can lead to a better living condition for animals and plant.
In conclusion, there are a lot of demands in modern life that put stress on the wild environment and lead to the decline in the animals and plant number. However, people can choose to make changes to their lifestyle and need, that can result in a better and heathier living environment for plant and animals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iving environment of animals and plant. Secondly, the need of industrialization ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93871866295 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80128682741 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462395543175 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.575769597 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.65 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.95 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232317390338 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838362552409 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067204759868 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15396724341 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667456499098 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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