No one can deny that we are heading towards a graying society, which means that there will be high proposition of elderly as compare to youngsters. Although, it should be not seen as a success story as, it brings more social and economic challenges for a nation. So, I can be said it a negative development with positive benefits.
To begin with, having a low proportion of youngsters means there will be dearth of workforce to keep the economy running and will decrease the tax revenue generated by the government. To meet the labor demand, the government will have to spend a lot to summons workers from other nations. This is exactly what is happening in developed countries like Canada and America. Secondly, the elderly basically suffers from health issues and well-being of them is always the government’s responsibility. Thus, with low income tax generation and cost of health insurance will be an albatross around government’s neck.
On the other hand, we can’t portray elders as evil, owing to one day we too, will have to pass through this process. We cannot bend the truth that we’ve made progress. We have gotten a gift of longer life and better health. So, the challenges we face does not outweigh benefits. The can take on to participate in social activities. Also, the have experience of life which would be very helpful for us. For example they, could help bringing up children and look upon them whole time or they can be useful in saving our third generation from going on fiddle. Secondly, willing elders would rejoin the job and support him/her financially. Working alongside with youth retirees would to stay active and feel productive while maintaining health.
In conclusion, retiring is inescapable truth. The Old-aged society will certainly have a negative effect over country’s development, but it would be lessen if we planned it well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...ace does not outweigh benefits. The can take on to participate in social activities....
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to bring' or 'bring'.
Suggestion: to bring; bring
...ul for us. For example they, could help bringing up children and look upon them whole ti...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01916932907 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77701400717 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626198083067 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1600169204 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6842105263 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111850798506 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357336622458 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484922838927 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818506286115 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497301004404 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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