In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society?
It is believed that adolescents always perform impolitely in recent years. There are a number of reasons behind this point of view and several effects are proposed.
There are two primary reasons why young adults often behave disrespectfully. One reason is that the wrong way the elder rear children such as saying harsh words or they are not role models of youngsters. Therefore, older people do not inspire respect on the part of younger people and young generation gradually is becoming rude. Another reason is that teenagers are impatient; this is typical of being young. Moreover, society teaches them to be even more impatient, for example, have everything now; get a degree and go straight to the top; education’s in; experience is out; and so on.
These aforementioned reasons can lead to a rich variety of problems. Firstly, children who lose their respect may have criminal activity when they grow up. It can be seen that the crime rate is rising steadily and this behaviour is a part in this rate. Secondly, disrespect causes the recipient to experience fear, anger, shame, confusion, uncertainty, isolation, self-doubt, depression, and so on. These feelings diminish a person’s ability to think clearly, make sound judgments, and speak up regarding questions or concerns. As a result, impoliteness not only sways the society but also in health care.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why children today usually are not polite, and some problems can be prompted for this trend.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20901639344 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89104705085 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66393442623 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9960572784 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24391839126 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699016487317 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564076814417 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138356186288 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403306970766 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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