In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment.
What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
Nowadays, young generation prefers to study in the universities in order to get advanced knowledge in special professions. However, the knowledge that has been gained through courses in the university does not help students for finding jobs as they graduate from university. Lack of experience, not being able to implement their highly qualified knowledge on practice and other similar factors ban graduates from employment. I am going to analyze those factors and offer solutions for this problem.
İt is noteworthy that the better education does not guarantee work for graduates because of lack of experience. Students as they leave universities without any work experience has not been employed by companies. Because employers prefer applicants who have been working in special field and have quite practice on his or her profession. Likewise, the requirements of companies is not met with only advanced theoretical knowledge, a vast majority of employers require some years of experience in field which is lead to unemployement of fresh graduates.
However, in order to gradually decrease the rate of unemployement of graduates universities have to take vital steps. While students study in universities, they also have to be given a chance of applying for internships in order to gain practice in authentic work conditions. Furthermore, the solution of this problem is also dependent on companies. Employers can provide students with part time jobs such as junior automation engineer which is beneficial for companies as well. Therefore, by giving part time jobs to students improves and develops experience of students and also after graduation, this student will be employed for that company.
To sum up, highly qualified students are lack of experience which leads to unemployement. However, by applying the solutions that I have provided can reduce unemployment rate tremendously.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'practiced'.
Suggestion: practiced
...working in special field and have quite practice on his or her profession. Likewise, the...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...es. Employers can provide students with part time jobs such as junior automation engineer...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...companies as well. Therefore, by giving part time jobs to students improves and develops ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, then, therefore, well, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51369863014 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08812214865 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8073664125 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120166492332 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462263463445 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370233055669 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812830737017 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257515610505 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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