Many governments set economic growth as their priority. Others, on the other hand, believe that other aspects also have similar significance for the countries’ development. This essay will elaborate on both sides of the argument and provide an opinion as a conclusion.
Developing the nation's economic status has become the primary aim of many governments in the world because economic status is a fundamental aspect of a nation’s prosperity. If the nations have made improvements in the economic sector, another aspect would progress positively. China, for instance, had set economic stability as a national goal for the past decades, and now the country is becoming one of the economic giants in the world. The improvement in the economic aspect is also indirectly making positive changes in other sectors such as the increasing of employment rate and decreasing unemployment number. As a result, the government aim for a better economic level of the countries that would bring prosperity for its citizens.
The proponent of this idea, however, considers that the government also needs to consider the improvement in other essential sectors such as education. Improvements in this sector are also essential to ensure that the nation's economic development is sustainable for the future generation. If the nations had developed good educational systems, the future of the countries would be in a good hand since the nations have adequate and skilled human resources to maintain economic growth.
To sum up, although aiming for a better economic level has been set as the primary goal of many governments, I believe that another essential aspect such as preparing and educating future human resources to ensure the sustainability of the countries’ economic shares similar significance.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02627945619 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489285714286 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1649659611 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191173591185 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854667768565 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386945829754 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129489394625 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481713673907 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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