Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are actually important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that to generate a productive and prospers country, the states count the economic project as integrant achievement. However, individuals argue that authorities must focus on other type of developments instead. Both sides have merits and downsides and I believe addressing to main issues of society could be more efficient for a country.
In on hand, many governments set their primary goal on developing in economic fields and gaining an acceptable place in the wealthy countries world ranking. To support their aim, they demonstrate some reasons. Firstly, regarding living expenses they have to bring up the satisfaction level of population and this factor depends on economic growth. Secondly, commercial rivalry could be a crucial item. Based on some scientific evidences over a period of 80 years all nations are competing in market frontier and their completion leads to economic war. Thirdly, authorities and MPs point out if they address to economic issues first, then they can tackle other type of progress as their citizens want.
On the other hand, the priority of people often located on the contrary side. They indicate that education, health care and public insurance, infrastructures and public transportations are the most essential and vital factors which their government should better settle first, instead of thinking about economic progress. To some extent, I agree with them and states should better tackle their demands. Facts and figures show that, the developed countries have been improved infrastructures and constructed lots of highways and subways, planned some proposed educational systems by adding new technologies in learning structures coincide with economic growth. Furthermore, there is no conflict between economic rise and addressing to individuals requests.
In conclusion, however the economic growth would be played a vital role in future of any countries, I believe that states must solve the most important issues and people requests first.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion, it is true, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51140065147 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87904030738 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628664495114 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4322770517 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240739833854 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667133279018 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402078819355 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127071041809 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296286562903 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.