Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is the issue of whether or not economic promotion is the main aim of government. While there are persuasive arguments in favor of significance of economic growth, I would argue that authorities should pay attention to other issues.
On the one hand, some people believe that drawing politicians attention to economic issues has several advantages. From their point of view, unemployment crisis and poverty stem from the inappropriate economic condition. It is claimed that the incidence of joblessness will be decreased if government solve their economic problems. They can create a job by constructing factories and invest on key and primary industries and as a result of the economic boom, individuals are less likely to suffer from poverty and lack of a job. They also mentioned that economic expansion leads people to enjoy a higher standard of living, whereby the crime rate decline. There are several factors which are contributed in life satisfaction including education, high income, a decent job and so on. Besides research findings confirm that crime rate has a reverse relation with the standard of livings. Residents benefit from a higher standard of living due to economic growth. Besides, the social gap and discrimination have been inhibited.
On the other hand, I believe that it is better for the government to advert other human's to needs. To begin with, the spiritual and emotional needs of citizens should be considered. The state should provide citizens with a calm society which is homogenous. They should have been involved in social welfare such as respect to the human rights, personal freedom, social security and democracy. Furthermore, they should attention to the environment as a major concern of human life. Environmental problem, water contamination and air pollution, is regarded as a serious threat to the existence of creatures and it is of paramount importance to some action regarded so as to ameliorate these problems.
In conclusion, whereas economic recession can bring about several problems, it is important for the government to allocate fair attention to both social and economic issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
There is the issue of whether or not economic promotion is the main aim of g...
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Line 5, column 663, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ount importance to some action regarded so as to ameliorate these problems. In conclu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32058823529 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94381499296 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555882352941 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7654015356 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137997562994 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401313641604 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453429234775 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916936373869 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383162492678 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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