many museums charge for admission while other are free do you think the advantage of charging people for admission to museum outweigh its advantage?
To summerize,from all the angles I believe that museum should sell tickets at certain limits so that normal people can easily affort and also get knoweldge from the museum
Museum are the education places which is very beneficial for the human .Some people pay charges to enter the museum.Although, it has negative effect.I believe there have more positive views
It can be denied that prices of tickets have detrimental effect on people,societies and museum themselves. From people perspective,they are discouraged to get information and knowledge, especially poor people cannot afford some amount of money. From society perspective, citizen have fewer opportunity to access significant places to learn history,arts, science and many other essential subjects.From museum presceptive, they cannot attain to educate the people .Moreover, they may have close the museum as they lose more of their customers
However, i think to charge the people when they enter the museum brings about mybrid of advantages .Firstly, museum will have money to operate to overcome the business such as personal cost,equipment electricity and water bills.Secondly,they need to improve the infrastructure and also need to proper clean up the museum.A good epitome is that recent hindustan times survey that museum which sell tickets are better then those which do not charge for tickets in terms of places, managment and information
To summerize,from all the angles I believe that museum should sell tickets at certain limits so that normal people can easily affort and also get knoweldge from the museum
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60638297872 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21065169265 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 283.725610797 49.4020404114 574% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 351.333333333 106.682146367 329% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.6666666667 20.7667163134 302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.3333333333 7.06120827912 444% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26736582874 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161066198712 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851973514814 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190162212734 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600349667049 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 13.0946893788 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.37 50.2224549098 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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