Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Indeed, museums are clear indicators that represent the identity of a nation as they denote traditions, historical tools, and the way people used to live in old times. Some people believe that showing parts of the history of a country in cultural places deserves a generous donation, while others see more benefits when people are allowed to visit them without paying any money.
Dedication of a reasonable entrance fee to museums can bring substantial merits. Museums are places where not only open up an opportunity to local people as well as travellers to gain information about the history of a country, but also can provide visitors with some fascinating services like live shows and on-stage performances to present historical events in a more tangible way. Furthermore, museums can enrich the experience of the watchers by hiring some professional experts having a valuable collection of data as long as an excellent oratory skill to convey it. Going one step further, museums need regular maintenance and a 24-hour safety service, ensuring that invaluable collection of items are going to be kept intact for the future generations. All mentioned facilities and services require a great deal of money that can be obtained from the money people pay as entrance fee.
Turning to the other side of the argument, there is a group of opponents who question the admission fee. They are on the opinion that the cultural places should be free for the population. They persistently emphasize that if people have to pay money, they may become gradually reluctant to allot time to cultural activities. In addition to ordinary residents and tourists who are interested in historical background of a society, students are considered as the main target of the museums. Schools usually arrange some specific tours for the students to be enlightened about the history behind their nation. If the museums make them spend money, educational institutes may not be able to afford it, disappointing them to serve such useful programs.
Weighing all the arguments presented above, I can conclude that the museums should ask the visitors to pay the entrance fee since this would make the owners provide more effective services and programs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16022099448 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78070200736 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577348066298 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7266988934 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.428571429 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168119371225 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574270557844 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029989264092 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959065467235 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031831070431 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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