Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Museums are the great places for people to know about the history and culture of one a specific place. People have been arguing whether the museums should charge the audiences for the admission fee or it should be all for free. I am definitely in favor of charging a small admission fee to the target audiences.
Firstly, the museums could use the money to maintain the antiques, operate the new attractive events, or create a better environment for their audiences. For example, local museums would hire people to perform cultural art or activities in the museum to propagate local culture. Moreover, the museums’ facilities may need to be maintained in a good condition to perfectly keep the antique items from harms.
The second reason for charging the admission is to limit the number of people visit the museum. For some famous and popular museums, it is necessary to only receive the appropriate quantity of visitors at the same time. If there is no entrance fee, everyone will want to come to visit the museum so that the museum could not serve the best atmosphere for the museum lovers who are keen on watching the ancient things and sculptures. Thus, admission charge is also one way for the museum to attract only their target audiences.
To sum up, some museums collect the entry fee while others do not. My suggestion is entrance charge should be applied in the museums because of its benefits. However, to attract the students and the locals, the free of charge or discount should be considered.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88803088803 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56337510068 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8053580996 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3846153846 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382001613958 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149208158852 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858487955599 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237547185319 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698549650027 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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