Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?
It is common for parents to send their children to extra classes after school time and at the weekend. Personally, I believe this is essential for kids as schools' teaching syllabus may not address all the students’ needs
Because each child is unique, schools may not be able to target and help them reach their ultimate potential. In fact, the system at school is established for the sake of the majority, which means the way teachers teach their students is compromised. It stands to reason that some students may find classes are too fast or too difficult for them to accumulate while others may not learn enough. As a result, organizing extra classes for kids is the sole solution to tackle this problem
Furthermore, every parents want their kids’ talent to not only be discovered but also become flourish, which is impossible if they just pursuit education at school only. It is also vital to recognize children’s aptitude and have appropriate tactics to nurture them, however, this can not be done at schools since they have to spare the attention to the whole population but not a single individual, which is totally opposed to extra classes. For example, a student who is competent in linguistic could not develop her writing skills if she just went to school and studied like any other students
To conclude, although there has been a drastic controversial between whether children should attend extra classes or not. In my opinion, I endorse the view that it is of paramount importance to organize extra classes for kids in order to either recognize their strong points as soon as possible or have adequate modification to their abilities
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97491039427 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65279953216 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4122465064 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.5 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.875 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295618468353 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1480061795 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096922577658 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19466965688 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666478241371 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.