In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they be punished?
A few subjects are as likely to provoke controversy as in many countries in the global, the youth have a proclivity to break the law more and more. There are a number of reasons for this trend and I personally think that the government and law-makers need to take steps immediately to promulgate plausible sanctions to reduce the number of young offenders.
There are at least two main reasons can be identified. Firstly, it is noticeable that there is an increase dysfunctional family in recent years. As a consequence, child neglect is becoming a popular social problem, children have the shortage of nurture and education from their parents, hence, they embark on a life of crime. Sometimes, the poor teenagers also have to resort to crime with the aim of making ends meet. For example, recently, the divorce rate in Viet Nam doubled and the juvenile crime rate increased directly proportional to it. Another distinct reason would be that with the explosion of technology at an astonishing pace, it seems to be that children become gradually addicted to the TV, computers, and smartphones. However, programs on these devices are not always reliable, concretely, there are numerous violent images on these ones that children and teenagers could imitate unconsciously, which make a contribution to breed young offenders.
Several penalties should act as a deterrent and would be one's useful measures to prevent rising juvenile crime rate. On the one hand, the youth who commit major crimes such as murder, rape, and drug trafficking should be suffering from strict punishments. For instance, in Japan, endangered young criminals must serve long prison sentences for their wrong behaviors. On the other hand, teenage breakers should be put on probation and compelled completing a certain number of hours in service to their community.
In conclusion, there are various reasons for rising juvenile crime rate and appropriate punishments need to be taken to tackle this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'these' instead.
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84909525113 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5354813063 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186524100231 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565427613095 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382476192283 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104517535917 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137494181007 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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