many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals.Do you agree or disagree? why?
Many people are against training dolphinsto perform in the circus because it may injures these animals. I do agree with this. First of all, dolphins are human’s friend, they are not for entertaining. They are very friendly and they are being used in some medical treatment. For example, people with health problems, such as cancer, hearing or vision impairment, or stress – take part in a program to improve their life’s quality and streghthen their spirit. Children with down synchrome, which is a condition when people do not develop in a normal way also improments after the program. More than that, dolphins are very friendly to people. Many stories about dolphins helping people has been reported
But the people at the circus think that dolphins are just some kind of their entertainmeint.
Some circus let the dolphins so starve that they have to do what the people at the circus tell them in order to get food. The dolphins at the circus are being treated very bad. This is very dangerous because con tact with people change their behaviour. If they contact with bad people and being treated badly, they will become very dangerous and may harm people. They learn to beg for a living, lose their fear to humans, and can do dangerous things
In conclusion, rather friendly or not, dolphins should be left to live in their natural habitat, not locking and treating them badly in the circus
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44829872905 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9212057905 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296556847884 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125475099828 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157188563408 0.0667982634062 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166177210835 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900264391445 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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