Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
Till now, many dolphins are injured during their performance in the circus. They are forced to perform to entertain the visitors. For this reason, I do agree with people who against training dolphins to perform.
Dolphins are highly social animals: warm - blooded mammal and very intelligent animals. The trainers usually feed dolphins after the performance and it is really not good for them. They may take a easy way out or lose their fear of humans or something like that.
Dolphins are 'echolocators' but they cannot use echolocation in a small pool. In their ocean homes, they can swim up to 160 kilometers per day but only around in the circus in captivity.
Moreover, the captivity weakens dolphins' immune systems. The chlorinated water not only worsens their wounds but also makes them lose their sight. Besides, the noise is very harmful to dolphims because it streeses them out.
Watching dolphins is so fantastic but in fact, they may be injured during these performances. There are many other ways to amuse ourselves than watching these wonderful sea creatures hurt themselves. We have to protect them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, may, moreover, really, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11956521739 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58581849094 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690217391304 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8792690857 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.2857142857 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306736785087 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926687816729 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935853695914 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154365244165 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125223342742 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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