many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals.Do you agree or disagree? why?
Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animal. I agree with this opinion. First of all, dolphins are an intelligent warm-blooded animal. They are very friendly with humans. For example, they can help fisherman in fishing efforts or occasionally rescue victims of shipwrecks at sea. Secondly, dolphins can help patients improve their healthy besides medical treatment. Thirdly, dolphins are so nice. They communicate with others by their own scream. Mother dolphins love their kids so much. They protect young dolphins from dangers. If people train dolphins to perform in the circus, they will be injured. Being trained too much can change dolphin’s behaviors. Dolphins are a really wild animal so we need to protect them from extinction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Many people are against training dolphin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 126.0 315.596192385 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34126984127 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66119288926 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722222222222 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 506.74238477 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8564539916 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.7692307692 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.69230769231 20.7667163134 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273619897678 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103494619802 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167198407746 0.0667982634062 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273619897678 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.34 50.2224549098 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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