many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals.Do you agree or disagree? why?
I agree with that opinion. Because in the circus, there are many different animals, such as Lion, Tiger, and Crocodile, they are very dangerous and can be harmful to dolphins. And because the dolphin is a very friendly, smart and don’t usually harm some animals else. So people have to train dolphins that they can against those cruel animals. Specially, dolphins are very smart, so they will know who are enemies, who are friends, that they will not hurt all of the animals in the circus. In my opinion, dolphins are very important to circus performances, so training them is necessary to have a good show. Dolphins are cute, lovely and intelligent, so we have to train them softly, that they will not injure anyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 598.0 1615.20841683 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 125.0 315.596192385 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.784 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48381641834 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 176.041082164 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 506.74238477 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2417936306 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4285714286 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226027519776 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113208186612 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534056053198 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226027519776 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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