Many people believe that companies and individuals should pay to clean up the environment in proportion to the amount of pollution they have produced. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples.
World has experienced dramatic changes over the past few years in term of technology. Undeniably it has made human life more luxurious and comfortable, but it has spelled ample harms too. Presently, it has been burning issue that industries and individual should contribute financially to keep environment clean in order to lead healthy lifestyle. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement.
Numerous points are there to shore up my point of view. First and foremost, government of thriving nations usually do not have appropriate funds to make people aware about the importance of neat environment. Hence, contribution through individuals could be a lucrative idea to tackle with this problem. To be specific, additional funds arranged by the individuals and industries can allow government to make extra efforts to save our beautiful environment.
Further emphasising on my point of view, extra charges on pollution producing vehicles will make people think to use private vehicles in limited way. Consequently, charging from individual can also contribute in preservation of environment. Furthermore, seminars to make illiterate people literate can be performed in order to make them aware with the importance of clean environment and they can also be taught about the ways we can keep it clean
In my notion, environment is our lifeline. Without healthy environment, it is next to impossible to lead a healthy lifestyle. Money can be earned back but not the environment. Thus, if a little part of our money can save our most precious environment then we should must contribute in order to live a healthy life and to keep earth a liveable planet for years to come
To recapitulate, healthy environment is a free gift to human which costs awareness. We must insist ourselves to make every little effort toward keeping it clean and healthy, whether it be money or anything else
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220895522388 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.182089552239 0.155533422707 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.119402985075 0.0946595960268 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0507462686567 0.0501214627716 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0626865671642 0.0437548338989 143% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0985074626866 0.122226691241 81% => OK
Participles: 0.044776119403 0.0403226058552 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00076206868 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0597014925373 0.0326793684256 183% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00298507462687 0.00163938923432 182% => OK
Determiners: 0.044776119403 0.0861772015684 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0417910447761 0.021408717616 195% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00298507462687 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1891.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15960912052 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338762214984 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28338762215 0.28420135186 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218241042345 0.203846283523 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.172638436482 0.137316102897 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00076206868 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5667752443 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 60.5802413308 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4666666667 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2165623136 49.517814964 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.066666667 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 48.8054288817 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.23232323232 1.69124875643 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353908526831 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.095066102961 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0618874415956 0.0668466124924 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.527220003981 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144586906591 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133877849008 0.134430193775 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648792757348 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298347490176 0.324371583561 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.067417579289 0.0638462369009 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218842124436 0.228012699653 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461470217018 0.058150111329 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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