Many people believe that criminals should be imprisoned; others, however, say they should do unpaid work that is beneficial for the community. Discuss both view and your opinion.
It is universally accepted that criminals are supposed to be locked up in jail as soon as they are evident for committing a crime. While it is often argued that these criminals should spend their life in lockup in order to make them realize that they should not have done the crime, it is also possible that they are forced to do work without any salaries as a punishment which might assist societies in numerous ways. This essay will take a look at both sides of the argument before reaching a concrete decision.
To commence with, it is inevitable that life in jail is quite challenging and the criminals have to struggle immensely every day. At first, they are not aware of what type of people they have to live with or what food they will be served or what activities they have to perform and of course, they do not have any right to ask questions, thus becoming dependent on every situation. For this reason, many offenders realize the meaning of independence and think twice before committing any other crime after they are free again. To illustrate, a report states that in Pakistan, sinners who have been in jail for one time are most likely not to commit the sin again because they are afraid of jail life.
Conversely, it is also worth considering that governments should avail the opportunity to make criminals work without paying them and that may lead to aid communities. Lawbreakers are usually smart and intelligent and they can perform tasks in their free time at the prison. This will have two major advantages, for instance, one is that criminals will be more skillful and possibly this will help them in getting a job after completion of their punishment. Another opportunity can be for the communities since female criminals should be taught the skill of stitching clothes and male offenders can learn the art of using computers and entering data which is the most demanding job around the globe.
Taking everything into consideration, it appears to me that criminals should be taught the skills and forcefully work without any cash reward as a punishment as this will most likely assist them as well as communities they will be working for.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, if, look, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78933333333 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59173935589 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3164686374 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.666666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259132777353 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095677952909 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566846138874 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175637151997 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287051640668 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.