Many people believe that formal pen and paper examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement What is your view of examinations

Essay topics:

Many people believe that formal ‘pen and paper’ examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement.
What is your view of examinations?

In this high demand society, exams have been an internal part of education. Some students argue that hand-written examinations are not the most effective measure to mark student's grades. In my point of view, I believe that although tests are of paramount importance, they still contain certain repercussions, and there should be more methods of examinations in the school curriculum.
Test results play an essential role in assessing students' knowledge and progression. This type of measurement creates a fair condition for all attendees sitting for the exams. Therefore, teachers and professors can select good students and assist others to perform better and gain greater marks. However, examinations have attributed to the increasing rates of illnesses of people. In other words, when a person prepares for those upcoming tests, he or she has to cope with the fear of bad marks, anxiety, and a large amount of stress. Consequently, people's well-being could be affected tremendously. According to a certain survey, researchers have stated that the more regular students take the exams, the higher percentage of them suffering mental illnesses. That is the reason why I think educators should produce more alternative methods to test learners' abilities.
Introducing different forms of assessment can mitigate pressure and encourage students to learn more effectively. Tests should be well-matched to the content and activities of the learning environments as well as they should be attached to real-life work and practical skills. In Singapore, most of their school allow students to test themselves by playing and enrolling in activities at school. This method has made Singapore's education one of the most prestigious and advantageous education systems in the world.
In conclusion, the examination can help the school to ensure learners' grades and qualities. Nevertheless, educators should include other forms of assessment if they want to get the best quality and results.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, as to, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50491803279 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04184557622 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8900113894 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7647058824 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152324925826 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476972165126 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486573391631 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105013779997 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039967005099 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In this high demand society, exams have ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...examinations in the school curriculum. Test results play an essential role in a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve methods to test learners abilities. Introducing different forms of assessmen...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: LEARN_NNNNS_ON_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
...activities of the learning environments as well as they should be attached to real...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ageous education systems in the world. In conclusion, the examination can help ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to get the best quality and results.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, as to, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50491803279 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04184557622 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8900113894 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7647058824 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152324925826 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476972165126 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486573391631 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105013779997 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039967005099 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.