Many people believe that online learning brings some disadvantages to students. Do you agree?
These days, online education is becoming increasingly popular with the advent of computer technology. Although there are some demerits of online learning, I would argue that there are far more merits.
To begin with, the main drawback of a virtual class is that there is less interaction between teachers and students. Communication is restricted by computer screens and students find it hard to concentrate on lessons. For instance, in an offline class, teachers can know whether their students understand the lesson or not just by facial expressions. Moreover, attending online classes makes students sit in front of the computer for long hours and their eyes and posture is suffering.
Despite the disadvantages mentioned above, I believe that online learning has several advantages, especially during the pandemic. Firstly, learning via the internet is convenient and time-consuming. Students can study at any time without wasting time travelling. For example, students don’t have to endure the summer heat or get stuck in traffic on the way to school. Additionally, the cost of online classes is much cheaper than a face-to-face class and students can learn updated knowledge through the internet.
In conclusion, despite the shortcomings of online learning, it is obvious that studying online shows undeniable positive aspects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54146341463 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97243333059 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653658536585 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7603794173 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209114533199 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711883050452 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487132956997 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112687142561 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451372264716 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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