In this day and age, the majority of people think that scientific
research should be management of the executuion process and
operate by government rather than private business. In my
opinion, I partially agree with this vieww that more and more
science product were produce by private company and they are
great useful for everyone.
On the one hand, private companies are the most factor
important to help develop the products as well as create your
own brand. First of all, producing an individual product is the
first step to introduce and bring the products closer to people so
that they create competition in the market since then their
products have become more and more famous in the world.
Moreover, society will be growth and become more mordern
because have benefit from new inventions. For example, a
private scientist - Mr.Mashon, he gave a new solutions about
existing problem in the universe that how to reduce the expense
of producing the rocket and way to explore the moon best.
On the other hand, goverments play an important role on
carrying out and controlling scientific research than private
companies. They are responsible for sciencetific research whose
aim to find solutions for social diferent problems in countries.
Especially, goverment usually prioritize the public’s benefit and
strictly follow safety producers. For example, the production of
vaccin to prevent Covid-19 is invented and strictly implemented
in the government to reserve the people’s live.
While privately funded scientific research plays an essential role
in creating brands and fostering innovative competition, I
believe that government-funded research has a more positive
impact on society. association and community
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
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Suggestion: First
...oducing an individual product is the first step to introduce and bring the product...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Mashon
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'solution'?
Suggestion: solution
...te scientist - Mr.Mashon, he gave a new solutions about existing problem in the universe...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Association
...has a more positive impact on society. association and community
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60594795539 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8654797045 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3706575925 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.38176352705 662% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240429985252 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827077858248 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933675969184 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593605952594 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952340408765 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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