It is widely believed that students at higher education level should have responsibility for their study by paying full tuition fees without any supports from their families and social organizations. From my personal perspective, I strongly disagree with this view because pursuing university's door is not only beneficial for their own students but also for the community as a whole.
On a personal level, imposing the financial burden on students' shoulder is not equal for some reasons. Firstly, stemming from the lack of health conditions as well as time shortage, students can not reasonably split their time between learning and working. As a result, their performance will be strictly affected, which leads to fail in exams and even expulsion from university. Another vital reason is that support from families and scholarship from educational organizations can act as a driving force, motivating students continue to embarking on their chosen fields. For example, the poor students, thanks to annually funding through charity, are able to attending university as other peers who live in wealth.
Regarding social standpoint, university students, who are the symbol of modern and energetic workforce, play a crucial role in developing national economic and boosting the well-being of society. It is indispensable fact that knowledge and experience resulting from university's curriculum are sharp weapons to get ready to embark on the world of works. if national labor workforce consists of well-educated employees, it has enormous effects on improving productivity and boosting national growth rate. Therefore, tuition fees can act as deterrent for students, preventing them from going further in educational road.
In conclusion, I would argue that students enrolling in courses at universities should not pay in full learning fees by themselves because benefits from both personal and social aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... ready to embark on the world of works. if national labor workforce consists of we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58075601375 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98916928739 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9508085448 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29231369534 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103723781683 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893903825677 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198288683014 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103478927567 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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