Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have a greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Parental responsibilities and roles are very important for the parents to make their children prepared for the future. But some people claim that strong health and higher economy, fathers will teach children becoming good person while others believe that father and mother have equally importance in raising children. I agree with the this statement and i will give some reasons in coming paragraph.
To begin with, women have proven themselves superior parents. They are less aggressive natures and they are generally better to communicate with kids. It is true that mothers have no replacement position in nurturing and teaching children. Mother can recognize when their children meet troubles in life. And also give some meaningful advise to children so children can solve their problems easily. Besides, mothers also emotion during the nine month of pregnancy. Thanks to exist that connection between mothers and children, mothers can become excellent parents.
On the other hand, Men remain busy at their works and have to stay outside the home most of the time, but women have lots of spare times to share with their children. Fathers provide the best condition finance which helps children to apply for good quality education. Equally important, fathers have social relationships more than mothers and are more aware of social issues, so they can guide their children on every step of children’s life.
To pen down and saying traditional gender roles in family are gradually changing. However, I still believe that both mother and father are equally importance at children’s successful for raising children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...tance in raising children. I agree with the this statement and i will give some reasons ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...en. I agree with the this statement and i will give some reasons in coming paragr...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...en to apply for good quality education. Equally important, fathers have social relation...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'it is true', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270833333333 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.159722222222 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0868055555556 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0486111111111 0.0501214627716 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0451388888889 0.0437548338989 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114583333333 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0347222222222 0.0403226058552 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63325293052 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03125 0.0326793684256 96% => OK
Particles: 0.00347222222222 0.00163938923432 212% => OK
Determiners: 0.0555555555556 0.0861772015684 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0208333333333 0.021408717616 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00694444444444 0.011925033212 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1635.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38671875 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40234375 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30859375 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203125 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125 0.137316102897 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63325293052 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 60.978597649 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0666666667 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4318181541 49.517814964 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 47.9260416667 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.65753424658 1.69124875643 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291698402769 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0764578346778 0.102741220458 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0388018763034 0.0668466124924 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496173436363 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140608932399 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107164282653 0.134430193775 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626449800087 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.292064561755 0.324371583561 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0815090052375 0.0638462369009 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196183085117 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032235409186 0.058150111329 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.