Many people choose to live alone. What do you think the advantages of living alone are and do they outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people, especially young people prefer to live alone, because they can enjoy being independent and they can enjoy the freedom of lifestyles. These reasons can be beneficial for some extent; however, the disadvantages override the benefits in my perspective, because people who live by themselves have to face the emergency situations and have to deal with all the house chores to be done by themselves.
People who live alone assert can enjoy freedom from their families. They can do whatever they want to do at their convenient time without their parents' nagging about spending time on video games or staying up late. Also, they can make their own decisions without any conflicts. When people live with his family, every decision has to be confirmed and told to his family. In particular, when a person wants to stay over night or going out at late hour, he has to persuade his opinion with reasons to his parents. In the worst case, he may give up his own opinion and follow the elders' decision to avoid conflicts if there is a disparity of opinion. Therefore, living alone can provide the joyful lifestyles for no-interruptions from families.
Further to this, living alone can provide the independent and the responsibilities for every decisions. Without any helps from parents, a person can make any decisions and the consequences from that decision should be dealt by the person. If the person decided to go for a party on Sunday night, he will learn about responsible for his decisions by attending to school or going to work on Monday morning. From this, he will learn the consequences from his decisions and he will learn to be responsible for decisions. Therefore, people will learn about being independent in every decision making and the responsible for those decisions.
Despite these benefits, when people are living by themselves, there are some certain tasks must be done compulsorily such as house chores. Without parent's help, people may face the difficulty to juggle house chores and resting for themselves. The house chores must be done regardless the condition of a person, whether the person is sick or fatigued, because this is not a mere choice. The person is difficult to manage all the tasks when he has to manage different types of work in a limited time, even though he becomes familiar with the repeated jobs.
In addition, there are times when other people's support and help are necessary. In the case of illness, for example, are usually difficult to endure alone. People want to feel treated and cared by others especially when they are sick because they are feeling vulnerable. Furthermore, people can get sick without warning or they can get accidents unexpectedly and those times, people require other person's, especially their families', help. It is definitely difficult situations like sudden illness alone.
In conclusion, living alone provides benefits by ensuring freedom and helping people become independent. Despite these advantages, those are offset by disadvantages because people should face the difficulties of house chores and emergency situations without anyone's help.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in particular', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217314487633 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.173144876325 0.155533422707 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0636042402827 0.0946595960268 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0424028268551 0.0501214627716 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0583038869258 0.0437548338989 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121908127208 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0459363957597 0.0403226058552 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74705882353 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0371024734982 0.0326793684256 114% => OK
Particles: 0.00530035335689 0.00163938923432 323% => OK
Determiners: 0.0865724381625 0.0861772015684 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0371024734982 0.021408717616 173% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0159010600707 0.011925033212 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3130.0 1933.35771543 162% => OK
No of words: 510.0 316.048096192 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13725490196 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.20517956788 113% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374509803922 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276470588235 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176470588235 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133333333333 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74705882353 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.037074148 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445098039216 0.56093040696 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.0708023567 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0891783567 155% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.222845811 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.814263465372 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 48.0470588235 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.4064516129 1.69124875643 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389105491328 0.332605444948 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152329439227 0.102741220458 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111382836838 0.0668466124924 167% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51056448442 0.534860350844 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14286877781 0.148594505496 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134260266396 0.134430193775 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643024130143 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.2978382929 0.324371583561 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0495978938481 0.0638462369009 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241335048155 0.228012699653 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043155796031 0.058150111329 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.68436873747 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 5.90881763527 237% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 10.4468937876 201% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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