Many people have the habit of shoping rely on according to their age group. Do you agree or disagree?
The shopping habits among people is expected to be different according to their age. While this may be true, many argues other factors like advertisment is more significant for one to inclined into buying habitual. In my opinion, I agree with the formal and believe the age to be the prime factor.
As a individual grows old, they tends to make more conscious decisions whearas young adults and teenagers make compulsive decisions. This level of difference in thinking mechanism assists adults to make smart purchase like buying clothes learning about the fabric or durability of a electronic device. However, a young immature often buys branded clothes and make unnecessary purchase of new phones on trending.
In addition, kids and teenagers spends more money for entertainment. For example, the kids are the main targeted customers of game playing electronic devices like psp and xbox. Furthermore, these people are susceptible to peer pressure. Generally, people above 30 are seen to spend more money on educational benefits like books and limiting the compulsive habit of seeking fun or entertainment like a kid on regular basis,which provides clear evidence shopping habits are related to age group.
Yet many argues the main factor to be the adverts because it is influencing people from all age groups into buying things. Now more than ever due to the advertising is done through social media sites audience are manipulated to buy stuffs controlling the shopping habit. Perhaps the young adults are the main victim of such ads as it can be seen it has very little influence on matured people as they are not buying expensive branded clothes or changing their iPhone every 3 months.
To conclude, other factors like advertisement might have little impact on one's shopping habit but still age group dictates it. In my opinion, it is largely due to the experience and maturity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15857605178 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72645991075 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1120409031 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.266666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189028720915 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651537859134 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774430521826 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108585260504 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614551626245 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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