Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
Nowadays, most individuals are far more likely to watch foreign movies. I strongly believe that governments should support local film makers financially to dominate the local market and even international market.
There are several reasons why most people prefer watching overseas films than locally made ones. I think that the prominant reason is foreign movie makers have a huge budget so they can hire highly accomplished producer, director and world-renowned actor and actress to produce a block buster film. In certain countries like the US and India, they have managed to be successful in this area and dominated the global market. Their global appeal is undeniable. To take an example ,Titanic is one of the most successful film which every film lovers watched it since a big budget was invested in process of making film and apart from monetary aspect, great actor and actress took role in it.
Government should allocat enough budget to support domestic film producers due to it has a wide range of benefits for country. If a country's film industry blooms, it leads to prevent cultural invasion especially among teenagers who are capital of a country. Furthermore, a plenty range of jobs is created which results in dropping the rate of joblessness. When the proporation of unemployment decreases consequently the rate of crime drops. As we know,the cost of keeping offenders behind the bar and reforming their characteristics is very high so it's better to spend this money to prevent by creating jobs.
In conclusion, because of high quality and special effects, majority of people prefer to watch foreign high quality films. By government's financially support, locally film producers could raise the quality of their production and give them opportunities to compete with foreign productions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, apart from, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3044982699 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82932440126 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63321799308 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8332423269 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431273281476 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121878142457 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111609773582 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247913937385 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795180451033 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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