Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries
It is true that more people prefer watching films, which have been made in overseas, rather than ones made by local film makers. there are several reasons that we encounter with this phenomena. In my opinion, domestic film industry should be supported by governments. (44)
there are several reasons why more people prefer to watch films which have been made in certain countries, especially western countries. In my opinion, low quality of local films causes they cannot compete with foreign films. To make a high-quality film, we need professional film crews, who work together in relative harmony and make good films. In pioneer countries, the us for example, all of these crews get together via huge budget. foreign companies, which access to huge financial source, can easily hire stars throughout the world. also, high technology of new computer’s software helps them to make scenes, which could not be done in reality world. using of these implements, need a big-budget and some experts, who can use them, while profession in arts.
I think, one of the governments’ duties is support this industry financially. there are many talented ametur film-maker, who need financial support, in each country. By this plan, the number of local film rise dramatically. As a result, the number of people working in this section will rise. so, the level of unemployment, which is one of economical factors to determain economy status of each country. also, production local high quality films lead to people will be encouraged to watch them. so, government will prevent to exit money from country to abroad in order to buy films. Even we can make money through export them to overseas.
In conclusion, more people prefer watching foreign films, there could be several reasons why this case have been done. In my opinion, domestic film industry needs to financial supporting that government should do that. (44)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32371794872 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71337718769 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.648072947 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.05 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465310329787 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131516392099 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102744858181 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326598371039 0.151304729494 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843081510695 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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