Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
it is true that many people prefer watching foreign films rather than those which have been made by local film-makers. there are several reasons why this is true, and I firmly believe that local film industries should be supported by their governments. (42)
there could be several reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than domestically ones. I think, primary reason is low-quality of local films cause those cannot compete with overseas’ productions, especially those that have been made in certain countries such as the USA. To make a good film with appropriate quality, we need many items, including professional actors and actress, accomplished producers and drictors. High budget accompany those items, even maybe main factor. famous companies, which are pioneer in this industry, access to huge budget in order to hire occupational film crews through the world. For example, many of stars in Hollywood emigrated from other countries to the US in order to become a star, while they could not reach their dreams in their homes.
In my opinion, governments should pay specific attention to this section, especially financially. there could be several reasons why governments should do that. I prefer to talk about economy dimension of this suggestion. Firstly, if government supported this field financially, it would promote. So, many of local resistance would be hired in this industry. As a result, a significant decrease will be done in the rate of unemployment. this decline could have many benefits for society. The next consequence of this support can be our currency income, which can earn from exporting local films to overseas. this income could transform countries’ economy status. I take American as an example again that could have made a lot of money via selling its films to abroad.
In conclusion, I believe that governments’ financial helping to local film industry could promote this section that competes with famous companies which currently dominate this market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41875 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8733623053 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5953439787 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2631578947 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507878663404 0.244688304435 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145751867934 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107462982291 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331243180297 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106682388857 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.