Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films.
Why could it be?
Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
Comparing to the local produced film, foreign film have more quality of almost all elements including: more budget for action, special effect, spectacular location, famous actors or artist and many others. While, it is also accepted that the governments should give more fund to as to aid the local film industries.
In Indonesia, Hollywood and Bollywood films are more likely as the enchantment for teenagers since they offer more spectacular film stars and effect with some astonishing places. In contrast, local films due to the poor financial support try to only survive with limited episodes and less film’s apparatus. The foreign films’ budgets are more likely as omnipresent because they are more marketable to gain income from many international sources including multinational sponsorship, international audiences’ ticket, and broadcasting rights with immeasurable dollars. A 2014 BBC News said that Fast to Furious 4, the renowned Bollywood action film, spending more than 1 trillion US dollar in their launching, but the outcome were paid out with the earnings more than 10 trillion only from broadcasting rights and ticketing. While, 5 centimeter, an Indonesian film in 2014, although getting numerous appreciation from the private and governments and reaching the best seller in its launching, they earned only 7 million US dollars at that time.
On the other hand, Indonesian government should offer particular loan focus on improving the local film industries. The larger funds the nation offer, the faster growth will be, why could it be? The financial support can encourage the quality of film such as, taking some renowned places in Europa or USA, collaborating with Indian film stars, and buying the latest apparatus to improve the effect. A 2018 Compas News found that Bollywood enable to produce one film almost every day owing to the loan from the Indian government, it is called “soft loan” that provide more than 7 billion US dollars every year. The film “Dhoom 3”, having 9 million dollars from loan and being the best seller at that time, they also enabled to use various powerful action effects like Hollywood film, as a result, they get various award from international and Indian film award as the most spectacular film action.
To conclude, foreign films due to more budgets, high quality apparatus and some fabulous places are more marketable to get international respond compared to local film. As a result, the local film industries are being left behind, while the nation’s input can be taken as treatable step to figure out the challenge. In the long run, I think it will be impossible especially in Indonesia because it is in need of a large number of funds in US dollars.
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...y in Indonesia because it is in need of a large number of funds in US dollars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, as to, i think, in contrast, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2325.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26018099548 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83162851061 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533936651584 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1636784011 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4666666667 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384116923966 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150906478975 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708028134276 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271573161411 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474096333947 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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