Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems?
Nowadays, it is true that the gap between the two classes of society is greater in many parts in the world. There are a number of problems behind this phenomenon and some possible solutions could be taken to tackle these problems.
To begin with, the increasing gap between the rich and the poor have more negative impacts on people and community as well. Firstly, this can lead to the discriminatory treatment in using healthcare or education service. While wealth families usually invest more money for their children on studying like studying in international school or going abroad, children who living in poor families have difficulty accessing a high quality education. Secondly, some poor people usually face to financial problems and can not afford high expenses so it leads to increase the rate of poverty and crime that threats to people’s life and creates some unexcepted consequences.
There are some effective solutions that should be taken to decrease the conflict between rich and poor people. Firstly, government should have more policies to increase benefits for poor people like provide financial supports or free education program. Secondly, the authorities should introduce new laws regarding apply a higher tax rate on people who have a higher income and control many big companies who have the action to evade tax.
In conclusion, the gap between rich and poor people is widening and bringing several issues in society like crime or unemployment. Therefore, government plays a vital role to solve these problems by implementing the two mentioned solutions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26877470356 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73302938306 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561264822134 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.700142784 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.181818182 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311996555535 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118902689278 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759811736005 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184601845049 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402917870479 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.