many people think that planes should be restricted because of it causes pollution and use up energy.
do you agree or disagree?
The issue of the impact of aeroplanes on the environment has heated up in recent years. It is believed that aircraft causes emerging problems as well as wastes a large amount of energy in the world.
Firstly, planes have been responsible for a great deal of air pollution. Obviously, aeroplanes create more emission than other modes of transport. Travelling by train, for instance, is also an effective way for long distance trips, consuming less energy and causing less pollution.
Moreover, air travel is also the main trigger for noise pollution. Even though it is difficult to measure the actual impact of noise pollution on people’s everyday lives. It is likely to upsurge the anxiety and a feeling of annoyance, especially to the people who live in the neighbourhood of an airport.
Although travelling by aeroplanes causes many problems, it does not mean that aircraft should be significantly restricted. Mainly because air travel is considered the most convenient way for long distance journeys.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28395061728 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94692159691 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1047713119 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.6 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126344352242 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458254813486 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426241751277 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738929854776 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362290077818 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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