Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-year-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think crime is determined by human nature？ Is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?
Nowadays, due to the breakthrough that has been achieved by brain researchers, many theories have been appeared for example it is widely believed that the behavior of a baby indicates the probability that they will convict crime in the future. Although human nature is important, I completely disagree with this assertion for soma compelling reasons, and I do believe that effective policies can be done to stop children from becoming a criminal.
People have a variety of behaviours in society. This is mainly because they grow in different situations and families, and the nature of human is not associated with it. To elaborate, there are more contributing factors than nature of human such as nurture, the educational level of their parents and the way they treat together. All the human beings are born innocent, and if they become criminals in the future, it means that they have been influenced by several detrimental factors especially in their early ages such as poor supervision from parents, toxic friendship or lack of proper education.
Juveniles can be stopped to not go further in crime, but the more they have gone deeper in crime, the more harder is to stop them. However, there are some feasible approaches to tackle this problem. Firstly, in large scale, I assume that schools is in charge to raise awareness of dire consequences of crime in society, and put some incentives to encourage people, who have been committed a crime before, to behave properly. Secondly, in small scale, parents should monitor precisely their children’s behavior and interactions to make sure they are not threatened by any external factor
In conclusion, it is claimed by some scientists that the future of a infant can be determined from how act when they are baby. The reason why I hold the opposing view is that there are more crucial reason for this issues than nurture. However, if an individual has involved in criminal activities, they can be stopped in any stage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0273556231 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75930259247 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568389057751 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.1392986915 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.833333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262860674785 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885469990739 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065322598713 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158506566391 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294331207895 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.