In many societies, elderly people often live-in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their ageing members.
In many communities, it is common to see that senior people are placed in retirement homes. Some people, therefore, argue that it is a wrong way to treat elder people, they believe that elder people should be fully respected and treated. I personally, agree with the statement and following essay will briefly explain it.
Due to busy lifestyle of many families, there aging member are often neglected. Hence, aging-home facilities are invariably considered, as they offer customize and daily needs facilities for elder people. Although nursing homes are quite capable of supplying variety of professional help and services, but the attachment to family is also important. As a result, it impacts elder people and lead them to loneliness, depression and isolation while living with a stranger.
Moreover, old people spent their lives for their families. For instance, they raise their children, teach them values and give education to live-in a society, share their interest with them. Hence, when they get old and need moral and physical support, it is children time to stand beside with their parents. Give them time, respect, love and care, they deserved to. Furthermore, leaving anyone is their difficult time is considered to be coward. Therefore, in my opinion, university will return the favor to that particular person and it is called Karma. Hence, we all should respect our elders, parents and give them shelter in our homes.
In conclusion, it can clear that old people should not be left alone in nursing or retirement homes. We should consider spending some times with our elders and give them love and care which give them joy and happiness.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12915129151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59029551599 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8973017931 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278966206588 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872332344354 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614363739205 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165825061714 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482548975622 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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