Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?
In today’s world, there has been an accelerating trend of students pursuing oversea tertiary education. This trend has many advantages such as better educational quality, as well as disadvantages namely culture shock. Both the benefits and drawbacks will be discussed hereafter.
On the one hand, there are a number of obstacles that students might suffer when studying abroad. Firstly, those studying oversea might encounter culture shock and culture-related problems. Living in a brand-new country with the incredible new lifestyle, food, custom, tradition and social atmosphere could provoke foreigners into the feeling of frustration, anxiety, and homesickness, leading to stress and bad academic performance. Secondly, students usually struggle with high costs of living in a foreign country. Besides the exorbitant expense of college’s fee, prices associated with accommodation, local transportation and daily demands are also high. Therefore, in order to cover the bills, many oversea learners opt to devote a considerable amount of time to do a part-time job, which significantly affect their performance at university.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why studying in a foreign country is beneficial. The major advantage towards studying abroad is good educational equality. With the teaching method of highly skilled and experienced lecturers and professors, undergraduates could acquire in-depth and specialized knowledge in the chosen field, hence getting more job opportunities later in life. In addition to education, navigating in a foreign destination encourages foreigners to form a better sense of independence and responsibility. Oversea learners, for instance, have to manage to do housework such as cooking, washing and cleaning and how to allocate time effectively between studying and part-time work, which in turn tend to help students to be more self-reliant and mature as an adult.
In conclusion, the aforementioned pros and cons display that there are many strengths and weaknesses regarding studying aboard. However, the drawbacks are more likely to pale in comparison to the benefits, thus if students are able to overcome those difficulties, the experience will be extremely rewarding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76132930514 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21915196397 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625377643505 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0603862791 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.1875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6875 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234764015852 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741742183664 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728454364748 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129127026224 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018760914224 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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