Many working people get little or no exercise during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
There have been a tremendous increase in the number of unhealthy people especially working people which is due to lack of exercises done during working hours or their leisure time. This essay will consider the reasons for this trend and the possible solutions.
The driving force behind this is that most working people live a far distance from their places of work, and are expected to resume work at the earliest hour of the day; hence such people cannot afford to exercise before leaving their houses due to the nature of their jobs and traffic experienced on their way to work. For instance, in Lagos, most people who work on the
Island of Lagos and live on the mainland do not have enough time on their hands for physical fitness before living for work because of traffic encountered on the road. Furthermore, during their leisure time they would rather spend most of their time resting due to the stressed experienced at work as well as spending some time with family and friends.
To avoid the damage lack of physical fitness can cause, working people should be educated on the need for exercises and its health benefits. For example companies should organize programmes where staff can partake in outdoor sports, also seminars should be organized on the need for a healthy lifestyle such that where individuals do not have sufficient time for indoor sports, they can as well adopt the lifestyle of healthy eating.
In conclusion, employees do not get enough exercise due to the nature of their jobs and perhaps the distance from their homes to work which in the long run leads to health issues. However, employers should help in educating her staff in the need for a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85910652921 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36425617357 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505154639175 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9473124215 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.111111111 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371970734912 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164719003048 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106630795314 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222404273565 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664640983167 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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