Missions to explore space are hugely expensive and there are problems on Earth which demand attention The number of these missions needs to be reduced Do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced.

Do you agree or disagree?

The space research and findings are too costly, so its effects on the globe are to be concerned. I totally disagree with the statement because decreasing Astro research won't overcome the problem it will make us back in technological development, even it's economic it shifts our era. The astronauts are making researching regarding the earth history, and differential architecture of the planets and galaxies led us for scientific innovations.

First of all, there are lots of articles, about the history of earth sourced in the magazines but those all facts are the outcome of the scientific research conducted by the different organizations. Though it's economic, it's giving information about the earth, different satellites are computing the results. Astronauts have an economic journey and cannot be conducted frequently, but the things that they bring back for us has worthy importance. Pollution level, greenhouse effect, and the earth age are the global concern also the NASA is an organization to conduct research in Astrology and provide huge data. It might be economical but outputs and facts that provide us is a concern subject for future development.

Secondly, Those surveys that are conducted gives an output for scientific innovations also being a source for new technologies.Different space has uniqueness and those factors migrate us for the development of new concepts. The concepts of satellites are helping us providing information regarding maps, weather forecast and many more. Such discoveries are reducing our problem like map data helps us to go anywhere and explore the world with a single application. These all are possible with space research, though it's costly than other instant problems.

To conclude that, the costly research isn't always useless it's a shift of direction of the positive development. Though space exploring gives us new technological movement and this development can fix the common problem of the globe.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08142729203 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7697454488 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104669343789 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399633334445 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245649481666 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698494683299 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00448439319802 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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