In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is indispensable that medium of communication between people have been changing since last 2 decades. In the fast pace world, the most attractive and powerful method of communication is done by pictures as compared to written materials. Although written words are an important for communication, in my opinion, I completely agree with that visual media has become the most popular communication method.
To embark on it, there are multifarious reasons why images are effective a way of communication. First and foremost, they have better visualising power and less time consuming. What I mean, owing to advanced electronic gadgets, everyone has a good quality of camera in their smartphones. Therefore, people want to capture their loving moments of life with one click rather than describing whole details into diary. And they can easily visualise their best memories by watching photographs that they have taken. Another is, images have power to make information interesting. For example, images are now used in the textbooks of children and also add short films regarding any history events. So, they can promptly understand any topics and subjects. As a result, children can remember the information for a longer period of time and make study more interesting than ever before.
Moreover, movies provide us a way to gain knowledge with entertainment. In other words, historical events are hard to remember via reading history books; however, films can make it more interesting. For instance, Bajirao Mastani movie has helped people to understand history of Marathas. This film was blockbuster on the box-office and gave knowledge about our past with entertainment. Furthermore, humans are always attracted towards visual media. Most the people are now preferred to watch news on TV media rather than reading a newspaper. Above mention reasons persuade us power of images or movies in the communication.
In conclusion, communication medium in the form of images and videos are effective and efficient for conveying people. Thus, I believe that power of visual media is the most powerful than written documents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36826347305 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98203743116 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586826347305 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7424094387 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.380952381 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2380952381 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238586149417 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600189046843 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462529983828 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144538832943 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384256631015 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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