In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is this a positive or negative development?
There is a controversial ideas heating debate over the fact that people are able to do their shopping, work via the internet and interact through computers instead of direct communication. Everything has both sides and this is not out of exception.This essay will tell the good and the bad sides of this matter.
On the one hand, the access to the Internet has benefited greatly the public for its convenience and comfort. With internet-connected devices, we are all connected no matter how old we are and where it is. For instance, during COVID-19 pandemic, I can video call with my grandmother in Ho Chi Minh City, only at the click of a mouse regardless of geographical barriers. Beside that, internet applications can help consumers and workers save a huge amount of time spent traveling to shops. As a result, we are enabled go shopping while staying at home and we can even save more money through promotion, coupon code…
While the redeeming features of internet are widely acknowledged, the drawbacks still linger. Firstly, virtual communication could discourage real interaction and ruining our relationships. It is common for heavy social network users to feel awkward when trying to strike up conversations with strangers or make small talk about social events. Secondly, Internet use has seriously affected our mental health. As a result, excessive Internet use may create little sleep, limited physical activity, possibly leading to the user experiencing health problems such as depression and anxiety. Finally, since people are unable to touch or to see the products they want to buy in reality, it is hard to examine the quality of these products. they might purchase the items with poor quality.
To sum up, although it has become more popular for people to socialise through internet, it has brought several drawbacks to be considered a positive trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91908369121 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679738562092 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0826455311 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171839741937 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049993765037 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220629941788 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920485727402 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140497564971 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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