More and more city workers are deciding to live in the country and travel to work every day. The result is increased traffic congestion and damage to the environment.
What measures do you think could be taken to encourage people not to travel such long distance into work?
There is an increase in the number of people who used to work in metropolitan regions, choose to live in their countryside and commute to their workplace daily. As a result, being stuck in traffic is more common and it also affects the ecosystem. In this essay, I will draw some solutions to inspire individuals not to travel to work in a long distance.
The first action is to improve the life quality there. For instance, a serious criminal issue, which creates a sense of danger in most citizens, is one of the main reasons why they want to leave cities and decide to move to peaceful, safe places where urban areas may not provide. The administration could employ more policemen to control the streets. In addition, a more welcoming and friendly work environment should be made to reduce issues including gender inequality, racism, or sexual abuse. This way could encourage people to stay rather than move out.
Another measure to tackle this problem is to create more job opportunities in the rural areas. In countries such as Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia, international companies are pushed by the government to invest in smaller towns. By being offered in these firms, the labor will not have to face long-distance trips to go to work, and conurbation will also reduce traffic congestion, even environmental pollution.
In conclusion, despite the presence of challenges, various keys could be undertaken to resolve the issue and make the destination more worth living, not just to work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.004 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8219851169 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4092377129 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290695117701 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864519010975 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421142417358 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15016951405 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378674629596 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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