More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can government make urban life better to everyone.
Nowadays, the number of people moving to big cities to looking for a higher quality life. However, there are many difficulties behind this attempt and several solutions should be taken by the government to deal with it.
There are two primary issues.The first is that the living cost in urban areas is prohibitively expensive compared to that of rural regions. It is worth noting that charging for housing is from twice to three times higher than the countrysides.Therefore, many migrants and homeless are living in slum or under bridges. Besides that, transport fees are also contributable to be a burden to the city dwellers. The second is that the gap between the rich and the poor is so clear. It is obvious that wealthy people and poverty live in two separate ares and the rich virtually isolates from crime, pollute. By contrast, poor people are putting up with crimes, trashes. For an example, in Rio DJaneiro, they divide the rich areas and the poor areas by a wall. Where wealthy people stay looks so luxury, modern and fulfill while on the other side of the wall, people live in poverty with poor housing conditions and chaos. Thus, life in cities is extremely stressful.
However, measure must be taken by the government. Firstly, the official organizations should offer housing for homeless and poor people or open doors to more and more unemployed for getting jobs. From this points, these people have ability to earn money and live on budget then life in urban areas of migrants can be improved and it would be more beneficial for all the society to reduce the rate of crimes and get a better life. Secondly, the government need to stimulate the rich to support and donate money or scholarship for poor students to change their life. As a result, the gap between the rich and others is narrowed.
In conclusion, It is clear that there are many problems in city life and steps need to be taken to tackle these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75595238095 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61118951009 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514880952381 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3046457941 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282536973425 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852694492205 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877011208124 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176381342893 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494667405195 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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