More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Over the period of time, the mentality and the lifestyle of people have been changed dramatically, which in turn has brought alteration in their choices, whether it comes to any product or cloth as a result, it has been become a common sight that people now have a more predilection towards branded things. Now, I am going to highlight some reasons of this development and its consequences.
To begin with, people now assimilate every single thing in their life with a reputation, fame and so on, and they do not want to compromise with anything, consequently they like to buy branded clothes on account of manifold reasons. Firstly, some people now take branded things as a matter of prestige and status irrespective of a thought of their financial conditions, which is an erroneous while others buy because they do not want any paucity in terms of quality in the product. Secondly, branded products ensure better appearance, durability and reliability as compared to other local products, which may prove harmful for the people because of substandard quality, and this again constitutes another reason for such tendency of people.
On the contrary, every situation is accompanied with two aspects, positive and negative, which is similar in this case. People's preference to branded items can be a symbol of progress and prosperity owing to some appealing reasons. Firstly, if people buy branded clothes, then partly it also indicates the living standard of the people of any country, thus helps in determining a country's growth. On the top of that, if someone believes in quality then it means that he or she likes to carry out his or her work in a proper way, which is again a favorable factor for any country. For instance, in America, people take quality into an account rather than quantity, and this country is growing due to to this propensity of people
In conclusion, I opine that people should thing as per their financial ability, regardless any influence. Here, this development exhibits plethora positive sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54430379747 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43413778923 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.3368939462 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.272727273 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1818181818 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236811422251 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872849782627 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434131588153 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130191063585 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438160860261 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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