Having a child at an older age is becoming preferable these days in many countries. In my opinion, this might be as a result of the low level of income of employees as well as fear of not being able to adequately raise a child.
There are two main factors why people choose to have babies when they are older. First, it is becoming difficult to cover the expenses of children. Parents should pay for rather unaffordable childcare, foods specially designed for children even if their salaries are not sufficient. Consequently, they should take out loans from banks which they have to pay for a long period of time, hence a low level of loving. Second, not all of the people are confident that they can be the best parents. They need to take some courses in parenthood to be sure that they can educate their child and help to find the proper concentration for them.
It seems to me taht the benefits of this trend such as the experience people gain in their later stage of life and better living standards of children far prevail over minor drawbacks. One of them is that experienced parents know how to deal with their child. They can effective disciplinary techniques which do not have negative psychological impact on their child. Otherwise, inexperienced parents can use the wrong methods of upbringing like severe hitting which can hurt the feelings of their children. Moreover, the people of older ages tend to save up money for their childrens' expenses. The can provide them with better education facilities and childcare. This can contribute to the development of one nation and high standards of living as well.
All in all, I feel that if people delay parenthood till older ages and concentrate on gaining income to afford the costs of having a child, this can lead to the welfare of society since youngsters can be giving better support and opportunities to develop their skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
...banks which they have to pay for a long period of time, hence a low level of loving. Second, n...
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Suggestion: all the
...ence a low level of loving. Second, not all of the people are confident that they can be t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people gain in their later stage of life and better living standards of children ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, well, i feel, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81651376147 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65051712837 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565749235474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5169874896 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209445405319 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725018112243 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04849040441 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123953469468 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464905053479 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.