The most essential component of a person’s life is his or her time at the workplace, and life turns meaningless once no job satisfaction is obtained.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern age, it is believed that the most decisive factor leading to life fulfillment lies in the experience in working environments. Although the statement is reasonable to some extent, I would argue that there are other fundamental elements beyond the workplace that contribute to the meaning of life.
It is undeniable that the involvement of individuals in working environments greatly affects their well-being for the following reasons. Firstly, holding a position that suits the employee’s knowledge of specialization can facilitate his competence to thrive rapidly, leading to better career prospects. Thanks to this development, he can gain respect from his co-worker, which contributes to higher job satisfaction as well as the significance of life. Secondly, the relationship among colleagues also considerably determines the enjoyment of life. Working in a professional and supportive environment, where colleagues care about each other sincerely, is believed to be an ideal condition for staff members to develop both intellectual and emotional well-being.
However, family bonding and friends networking are the more important contributors to living contentment than job satisfaction. Firstly, as opposed to working places with competitiveness and stress, family is where people can seek unconditional love and inner peace. Specifically, if a person feels disappointed in his company, he can go home and relieve his depression by sharing his problems and receiving deep reassurance from his family members. Secondly, friends networking is also an indispensable component that makes life more meaningful. As a saying goes: “A friend in need is a friend indeed”, having a long-lasting relationship with faithful friends beyond workplaces, who are eager to lift an individual up when he is in trouble, does not only offer emotional but material support that rarely exists in fast-paced conditions of work.
To reiterate, although job satisfaction plays a significant role in the life of every individual, the quality time spending with family and friends is more crucial for human well-being.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68553459119 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31051881561 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610062893082 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0585696553 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.076923077 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163240397132 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595631180974 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495653877968 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107952683941 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025758184195 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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