The most essential component of a person’s life is his or her time at working place, and life turns meaningless once no job satisfaction is obtained. To what extent do you agree of disagree?
Due to the increasing unemployment rate around the world, many people indicate that the most fundamental part of people's life is career contentment while they are working that without it, living reasons will disappear. While numerous individuals support this view, as far as I am concerned, life will not be purpose-deficient with the shortage of occupation happiness.
There is a conspicuous feature interpreting that occupation enjoyment is an exclusive living purpose. People often argue that job satisfaction is always associated with promotion and passion since these factors determine a person's performance at work. Consequently, career prosperity is able to result in the co-existence of a higher rudimentary and respect from co-workers. In contrast, without occupation success, people will try in vain, devote their youth, dedication and passion for a dead-end and incompatible job.
On the contrary, I wholeheartedly commit that with the deprivation of job contentment, life remains sufficient with different purposes depending on people's prospect and the way to make it meaningful. Outstanding trips and unforgettable explorations are the one among numerous preponderant reasons. This is primarily because these features can bring back crucial knowledge and experiences for a person to be more mature in both physical and intellectual development. Hence, people have the ability to become accustomed to instant shift in global trends. Equally practical, social and charitable activities contribute tremendously to a person's happiness, success and satisfaction due to their meaningful messages. By helping the unfortunate, citizens are definitely respected by the society and become influential. Nash Daily is often cited as an example because he has quitted his job as a programmer, raised fund and operated many charitable projects around the world.
To put it simply, in terms of job satisfaction, people support that without achieving it, life will be meaningless. Although evidence is undoubted, I believe that there are numerous alternative choices for people to fulfill their living expectation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...passion since these factors determine a persons performance at work. Consequently, care...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...omed to instant shift in global trends. Equally practical, social and charitable activi...
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Line 3, column 634, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...activities contribute tremendously to a persons happiness, success and satisfaction due...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, so, while, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74840764331 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28079427881 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614649681529 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4340500082 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131285900738 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392943901999 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423783106189 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813345908108 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0048557845314 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.