The selection of work after having degrees have become more confusing due to the increasing necessities in a modern lifestyle. It is stated that more salary should be the maiden priority before selecting any sort of job.total agreement have taken my preference and this will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs with appropriate reasons before writing a particular conclusion.
It is noteworthy to mention that seeking high income is prioritized by all well-educated and excelled people. This is mainly because of security for the future which will one can attain only after having a golden career. For example, in New Zealand, the majority of people finding a such kind of work opportunities that will offer them a large amount of money and it not only provide them immense relief but also pave the ways for new achievements in business without having any kind of stress. Hence, it would be tremendously superficial for one to rise in business.
In addition to this, except the security, another reason for finding high salary is that it is highly regarded in the societies where people live, through which there standard and richness judged by other people in the community. For example, India is a country in which individuals are observed by their career and money. Thus, the above factor clarifies why the consideration of having job with heavy salary took great preference.
In conclusion, after analysing total agreement regarding high income. From my perspective, choosing a job must be depends on various things, however, high salary can prove beneficial for having unexpected alterations in the career path in the future. Eventually, it Should be the first in one's priority list before the work selection as compared to the other considerations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
.... Eventually, it Should be the first in ones priority list before the work selection...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16842105263 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85055274807 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9888050349 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161538950088 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590135276001 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395043421004 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998205446809 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150728018033 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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