Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population. This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city areas as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted.
Give some reasons why this growth has occurred and suggest some practical solutions to this problem.
Nowadays, migrating to cities for better life and future is becoming major trend in the world and these issues are leading to the problem of declining quality of life and environmental problem in urban area. The essay will examine the cause of urban growth and possible measures to solve the problems.
To begin with, one of the major causes of growing urban area is centralized policy of country in developing countries rather than developed countries. people always want to enjoy every modern facilities rather than living in rural. Moreover, people tend to migrate in city area for better employment opportunities and to earn and save for future. For instance, the recent research had revealed that, the pollution level of Kathmandu is increasing day by day and it is one of the most polluted city of Asia because of over population. Furthermore, higher living standard , better medical facilities , quality education are also major cause of over population in urban area. However, lack of modern technology, poor crops yield, lack of infrastructure also lead the people to migrate to city for betterment of next generation.
On the other hand, government and local authority must give emphasis on solving the problems of urban growth. First and foremost, decentralized policy must be applied in country, the people of particular nation can enjoy all facilities evenly. Creating employment opportunities, improving infrastructure in rural area, proving modern technology and subsidies for farming can help to make people stay in the same place where they are born. Additionally, people do not want to move to strange and polluted area, leaving fresh environment of nature, if they get to enjoy all basic facilities in village area. In addition, medical and better health care, quality of education for all children and other basic amenities must be evenly distributed to all over the country to reduce the overpopulation and environmental problem in cities area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28662420382 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86586583588 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53821656051 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6151811147 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.692307692 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179616605997 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06280777359 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585935312255 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132769817339 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380368739537 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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