Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

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Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

Many countries rely on motorways as the main roads for speedy and efficient transportation because these are a very convenient way of travelling long distances. However, motorways have many negative aspects such as environmental and dangerous traffic. To solve this issue, the congestion fees and other alternative methods should be implemented.
Motorways are the convenient and easiest way to travel for long journeys. For instance, in the US, if people take a normal road to travel from New York to Washington, it would probably take more than 10 hours whereas motorways can shorten it to 4 hours. This could be possible due to the motorways’ speeding limit is higher than the normal roads and it is the direct and closest roads. From this, the time to commute can be reduced by more than half and this time can be used for other activities. Therefore, motorways are the most efficient transportation ways.
In contrast, motorways produce massive congestion and environmental damages. Since majority of cars would be willing to access these roads to take the advantage of speedy and convenient way of travel, the roads will be suffered from traffic jams. In addition to this, the massive traffic jams would have a significant impact on environments to be damaged. The massive carbon dioxide and toxic emissions released from each vehicle will be gathered at atmosphere to create global warnings. The global warnings has impacted the earth drastically as the earth cycle has been distorted. Therefore, the immediate solutions seem required.
Even though there are several ways to solve this issue, the most effective way could be the charging the congestion fees. For example, the roads between New York and Washington are connected by motorways only and in 2015 surveyed that more than 18 billion cars have passed per month. In the UK, after the congestion fess has been introduced, the number of cars using the motorways reduced by half and they expected to be continue. Thus, the congestion fee can be the effective way to solve this issue.
Also, other alternative methods should be sought to reduce the number of cars using motorways. The government can provide the mandatory programs for road safety to all drivers so that they can acknowledge of circumstances of using motorways. The governmental programs should be used along with the congestion fees so that the motorway usage can be dropped.
In conclusion, motorways have several advantages for drivers reaching the destination faster and convenient ways. However, there is a dark side of this, which are the congestion and environmental issues and which can be solved by congestion fees and governmental programs.

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Average: 7.8 (3 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251559251559 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.162162162162 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106029106029 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.033264033264 0.0501214627716 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.010395010395 0.0437548338989 24% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.110187110187 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0561330561331 0.0403226058552 139% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86692198072 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.035343035343 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106029106029 0.0861772015684 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.037422037422 0.021408717616 175% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.004158004158 0.011925033212 35% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2686.0 1933.35771543 139% => OK
No of words: 435.0 316.048096192 138% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17471264368 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20517956788 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365517241379 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287356321839 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.222988505747 0.203846283523 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.165517241379 0.137316102897 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86692198072 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.037074148 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468965517241 0.56093040696 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.721694337 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0891783567 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9130434783 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2884891163 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.782608696 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.6486756622 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.0303030303 1.69124875643 120% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273809082085 0.332605444948 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101266258044 0.102741220458 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0680691473014 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553632870624 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141234163211 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118545173934 0.134430193775 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628073638261 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.384324762874 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0871844499555 0.0638462369009 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192495906789 0.228012699653 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357046028509 0.058150111329 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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