Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problem of motorways and what solutions are there?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
the volume of the vehicle has developed drastically for over one decade. Every household has their own cars, two or more. This growth affects a congestion at every crossroad. In order to prevent this, government constructs a motorway. Unfortunately, this construction causes unpredictable situation whether it comes from human action or environment.
Most every freeway access was built on the productive soil. As a result, a land degradation occurs due to the prevalence of falling trees and fewer spot trees to grow. The top layer of earth remains strong if it is held by trees, and if the earth has lost their trees the land will vulnerable to erode. Consequently, our island shape will get smaller at every century. In order to prevent that, the constructors have to study the geological side of the land at the first hand. Once they found the result, they have to prioritize firstly on death soil rather than potential soil.
In addition problem, the one-way road system in motorway impacts most drivers becoming more relaxing and pleasant. However, this situation creates the loss of concentration and majority of drivers will fall asleep unconsciously, then the traffic accidents will occur. Regulating minimal pace to accelerate is the one-way factor to tackle that problem. People can focus on what the speed to achieve rather than hallucinating while driving. Furthermore, the government should build extra rest areas, so the tired drivers could rest and sleep.
Interestingly, this type of street also becomes a suitable place to the juveniles to arrange an underground race track. The wide long smooth track is appealed bu number of youth racers, and it happens mostly at the night when the roads are seemingly quiet. Quick action has to be conducted to reducing vigilant actions. The police officers should patrol at every hour, and they should install the drones to watch every anomaly. Moreover, the relevant punishment should be directed to the illegal racers.
Above all, the government should not just provide the best traffic circulation but the must concern firstly on how it affects on what surrounding it, and have to take care of it at the prior or post construction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, as to, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11977715877 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76163861465 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626740947075 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8918644095 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5454545455 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3181818182 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981524642179 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260571109773 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025194590008 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500396630208 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224112017446 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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